Love is so hard to compare

Love is mysterious,

And makes me feel hideous

Sometimes I become cautious

That makes the people I care about nauseous.

It's hard to explain with love always there

But I know that love doesn't care

Cause it can takes your heart while eaten a pear.

 

As i smile and laugh

Love argues and says enough

Why I don't know!

But I can be sure

That he can see my heart mourn

As the one who I love hids away

Beause it was in may

And makes it difficult for me

To take a pen and say he

As it is a high fee

for me to pay

This is because love for me

shall always be myserious

and i shall feel hideous.

 

 

 

Author's Note

Hope you enjoy as it has sentimental feelings :S

Reviews

[Trix]

this poem does seem to have sentimental feelings.
i don't quite understand these lines though:
"But I know that love doesn't care
Cause it can takes your heart while eaten a pear."
maybe it was to make it rhyme, but a different choice may give the poem more meaning.
also, the second stanza seems to lose rhyme sceme while picking it back up at the end.
i do not know whether this was intentional or not.
besides that, this poem has wonderful meaning,
and seems to be carefully structured to include the distraught that love can cause.

[wizthom]

learning emotion are just away of growing well said