Broken Soul

Broken Soul

A Poem by Rena Beau
"

There's actually a second rendition of this poem, to be posted as well, but this is actually the original version of it. Written November 29th, 2003, also under the alias of Ronnii.

"

A broken heart,

a tortured soul,

she faced the darkness,

on her own.

 

A small child,

with a sad face,

all she wanted,

was her own space.

 

Now she sits,

alone and cold,

with no one to love,

and no one to hold.

 

 

© 2008 Rena Beau


Author's Note

Rena Beau
This poem may end up inducted into one of my stories I'm currently working on called, "Can You See What I Really Am?" as part of the life of Dmitri, we'll see.

My Review

Would you like to review this Poem?
Login | Register




Reviews

I feel as if the last 2 stanza's are like, be careful what you wish for... wanting her own space, then having it but alone, cold, with no one to love

short piece but very heartfelt.

altho i do wish i knew a bit more about what darkness she had to face...

great write though

much love n respect

-Lalli

Posted 16 Years Ago


I think it would work well as a base. It is short and simple, but emotion filled. Well writen and well though out.

Posted 16 Years Ago



Share This
Email
Facebook
Twitter
Request Read Request
Add to Library My Library
Subscribe Subscribe


Stats

142 Views
2 Reviews
Rating
Added on March 31, 2008

Author

Rena Beau
Rena Beau

Virginia Beach, VA



About
My name's Serenity Beausejour, Rena Beau's just so much simpler for the general public. I love reading, love writing more. I'm nineteen, and I am a happily taken (no, not by the father) teen mom, bu.. more..

Writing

Related Writing

People who liked this story also liked..


Little Bones Little Bones

A Poem by Bubo


Masks Masks

A Poem by TamiViolet


Juicy Juicy

A Poem by TamiViolet