Those damn kids

Those damn kids

A Poem by Oren Giovanni
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A short pov of a young lad in love :)

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Friday morning, 
Park is green, dog poop is white, and she is here...
Once again we meet on a sunny July day,
Birds are cursing loud and clear, go f*****g talk to her already!
Chill out birds -_-
I'll do it soon enough...
Walking towards her at a speed not so threatening, 
But again that stupid butterfly has captured her attention!
Looking around awkwardly, uncomfortably close,
Ladybug! help me make her jealous!
Yes, whose the lonely one now? HAHA!
*ladybug flies away*
-_-
Ummm ok, ok,
Maybe she didn't see, maybe she doesn't want to notice me,
Or that butterfly has all the right moves, or maybe i have no groove :/
Did I pee my pants? Are my undies full of ants?
Will she ever speak to me? or even give me a wave goodbye?
Will i live alone and cry all day? Does my barney shirt make me look gay?...
No this is blubber nuggets, I have all the moves, oh yes!
This silly girl I will impress!
I will take my gal from that awful worm!
Those caterpillars do nothing but squirm!
I will march on strong and march on through!
but first i think i have to poo :/
Now that business has been done,
I'll go claim my lovely one!
Hey girl my name is Kevin,
And I would like to say, that dress looks nice,
Would you like to come fly my kite?
It would be a shame for your pretty hands to get full of dirt,
Ok Kevin, i'll get out of this dirt, Only because I really dig your barney shirt :)

© 2011 Oren Giovanni


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Good, but I didn't see much emotion in it...

Posted 13 Years Ago


well its very entertaining since its its not too serious or showered with heavy emotions the readers will really enjoy this poem.


Posted 13 Years Ago


Aha, that was really cute :) . I liked the ending a lot. It was kinda choppy though. It didnt really rhyme in the beginning, but started to at the end. I dont really know what to make of it, just an observation.

Posted 13 Years Ago



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Oren Giovanni
Oren Giovanni

Milano, Italy



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I'm a regular kind of different. I'm 18 and have no confidence in my writing really, people seem to like it, but as long as it puts a smile on your face, inspires you, makes you challenge me, as long .. more..

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A Poem by Oren Giovanni