I love this feeling

inspired by the song, Cook, clean, pay the rent, by Teebs.

Weary like a soldier in your arms,

High like the balloons that grace your windows,

We're nothing but two left shoes, unfit for anyone but each other,

A lot has not passed between us

but we still find comfort in knowing we know nothing of one another,

Time flies over us as we lay low trying to avoid the vivid reality of life,

Our feelings come and go like a bubbly riot,

not a kiss donated to our starving lips,

like greedy gods, we keep our prayers to ourselves,

We know nothing but to hide everything that will ruin us,

But there is no us, only you and me, 

We skip hand in hand in our own embarrassing way,

holding onto the fear of losing each other,

love is not our final destination, but where we have begun,

Now all that we have left is a memory of us, one that ended,

as soon as you and me began to run..

Author's Note

this doesnt make much sense but i typed it out of sheer joy :)

Reviews

[Winslow Des Totes]

Wow, very nice write! I especially liked the line,
"Our feelings come and go like a bubbly riot,
not a kiss donated to our starving lips,
like greedy gods, we keep our prayers to ourselves."
It's romantic and sweet but still emotionally stable. Great write!!

[stars are far]

this is sweet

[Nameless]

Makes sense to those who feel the same way :P Favourite line "we're nothing but two left shoes, unfit for anyone but each other," so special lol. Mainly a light aura, although the last two lines are a reminder that in a sense, this kind of love "ends when it begins". Thats what I got out of it anyway :) right on

[Oren Giovanni]

Pretty close but its just a poem i decided to write out of pure craving,
my best guess would be that it is about two who dont want to give anything too much to eachother and in doing that, they find that since neither of them has let themselves fall, there is no reason to be afraid, there is no need to wait, they can move along with eachother knowing minimal details but still experience life together as if they were both deeply in love :)

[Dreamer]

okay so i had to do a little analysis but despite ur claim that it doesnt make much sense i think I have gotten somewhere:) Finding happiness in knowing that they know nothing of each other means to me (personally) that their journey has just begun. There are still roads for then to travel, things for them to discover abt each- its fresh! What i get is that they have fallen fallen into 'love' (which in my opinion isnt love beause love doesnt happen like that) Instead, it could be lust- it burns quickly bright and hot but burns out just as quickly. Maybe that is why u ended so soon. I truely cant make head or tail out of the 3rd line.lol sorry maybe u can clear it up for me.