Never

Its a reflection on who i am and always will be.

It's not the way he speaks or spells, 

The way he shakes your bitter heart,

He needs to grow in his own hell,

Like a angel corrupted from the very start,

It's not the way he smiles and lies,

The way his heart aches for the truth,

The corrupt mind he will always despise,

It digs into his soul like a cold tooth.

Never to know when and where his heart will be,

Nobody to believe in him when he sat blue,

Surprised as to what he could see,

A life in the mirror, born anew, 

Said goodbye to his peaceful grave,

To resurrect a monster once lost,

Learning new ways to live love and behave,

Only to find himself lonely and lost,

Respect lost for himself never to be found,

But he already knows too much,

It's not the way he sleeps and dreams,

The way he cries when he looks outside,

He is never to be himself again, its how it seems,

But the only wish he has, is to once again,

Live a day when he can breathe with pride...

Author's Note

it took alot for me to type this, any reviews will be appreciated.

Reviews

[CHRIS ANDES]

itw's like a man waiting to crack his own shell,right?!....
.....i have also that kind of attitude

[stars are far]

this is really great
i enjoyed reading it :) keep goin

[Nameless]

You're writing is phenomenal. It is so personal yet so relatable which is what captures the audience's hearts. I can just feel the power behind this piece as you wrote it. Most of you're poems seem to exert and focus on alot of imagery to portray the feeling, which i think is amazing, these words seem as though they came right from inside which is a nice way to portray this kind of personal, raw feeling (If that makes sense haha). Anyways, very nice :)

[Chelsea.]

You're a wonderful writer. Many people can relate to the feeling of this poem, which i find to be kind of sad. You are never truely stuck, though. You always have the ability to change whatever you do not like, or at least try. I tended to focus on " The corrupt mind he will always despise. " What exactly do you mean by your mind is corrupt? It seems like confidence is what you're struggling with, and that can always be regained. You just have to work on it. Nevertheless, i like how this flowed, and if you ever need someone to talk to, im a pretty good listener :)