You'll never be mine.

For her

You'll never be her, You'll never graze my lips.

But I'm dying to know, I'm dying to know how it feels,

I'm wishing you weren't so damn honest

Can't you just lie to me and say you love me!?

Won't you give me false hope? In order to fuel my raging heart?

All I want is you, all I need is you

Am I in love? or am I insane?

Your perfectly shaped ruby red lips,

Diamond eyes which gleam like the stars

Hands more pure than the holy ghost

Thighs that trembling at my touch

Wishing you knew how deep my heart drowns in the sea of your thought.

You'll never know, I'll never be yours,

But most tragic, You'll never be mine.

Reviews

[Houda Sabri]

I can't stop reading this poem, I always feel this way every time I meet someone I like...
I fall hard while the other doesn't even know.

don't stop writing please :)

[Dreamer]

At the beginning of this poem i thought that the persona was rejecting this person "...you'll never be her" But as i read on i realize it is the other way around. I personally like a poem when the poet can get the emtions imbedded into every line. True emotions captures the reader and u have done this:) I like the images. when you say you'll never be her, is the persona speaking about a particular person or is 'her' his 'dream' girl? If it is the former then i can understand the woman's point of view in this poem. No one wants to be forced into someone else's mold. Thank you, ur poem has dimension:)

[Gene Hiccup]

whew..it seems your a very romantic person..the poems you haved posted is all about love and i can really relate i hope you would write more poems about this theme..

[Nicky Wilson]

Really really enjoyable and I can completely relate to it. Love is something that has been really overdone in writing but this was good reminded me of that simplistic type of love that we all take for granted and honesty is indeed the hardest part fear of rejection among other things. You captured it well keep writing :) nice job !!