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I'm trying to fill my mind with words i don't understand.

You saw me walk and walk and walk, 

I fell on purpose

Assuming you would reach out

Help me to my feet

Save me from the cold street

Into your warm embrace, 

You saw me fall, day after day

Scarred and bruised

You seemed so embarrassed

Of who was falling for you,

Ignored and ashamed

I tread carefully now

And I smile as I walk by,

Now you know, 

Who I am.

You set up traps and traps,

Waiting for me to trip and fall,

But I no longer walk by you, 

As I have been helped by another gal,

And I finally have it all.

Reviews

[Gene Hiccup]

its beautiful..people can easily relate to your poem especially those whose feelings are neglected....

[Kristine Ferg]

Very deep and personal. It carries a very tragically beautiful story. Well written :)