Give Up

Give Up

A Poem by Remajakl
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My ending for you...

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Should I ever give up on you..
It a cruel statement…
I think I like you..
I love you..
But is it worth for all of that..
When I start to feel far away from you..
You came to me..
Give me light in my life…
You gave me strength..
You make me believe that you care..
You are there when I need you..
But then.. 
Sometimes it feels fake…
It is easy to just break a trust…
Then you try to build it again..
I feel that I shall stop..
From chasing you..
Cause I knew where I stand…
It leads nowhere…
You say sorry..
You said it many times…
That word are just to easy for you..
Sorry for that.. sorry for this.. it is not on purpose..
How shall I be strong anymore..
Everyday you break me..
You hurt me badly and very depth..
You make me want to quit and give on you..
But then you came and lead me..
This circle should not turn and turn…
Cause you make me lost faith in you..
Adele song said that..
“Should I ever give up..
Or should I just keep chasing pavement..
Even if it leads nowhere..
Or would it be waste..
Even if I knew place…
Should I leave it there..”
I think I need to make a right choice..
I don’t need to be suffer anymore..
Should I stay or let it go..
I pray to god.. Please…
I need you in making my decision…
Or I will lost forever in these dilemma.

© 2011 Remajakl


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I know these feelings at times, It hurts. This is such an emotional read and makes you think really. Very nicely done and written.

Posted 13 Years Ago


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Added on July 24, 2011
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Remajakl
Remajakl

Kuala Lumpur, Wilayah Persekutuan, Malaysia



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