The Loved Ones

HOPE FOR LOVE

(PART 1)

With rosy cheeks

And pale lips

Hands on her face 

to hide that pain

But it overflowed....

Cause the one she loved 

was loved so much 

that even love would run stale

(PART 2)

With her eyes closed tight

to stop tears falling down

Tears dripping from her face

seemed like you would drown

That's how deep love is

We never had eyes for it 

till now....

(PART 3)

That breathless moment

As she gasped for air

Squeaking her voice

Like swallowing a flare

Rubbing her eyes

she heard someone muttering 

in the room next to her

" Let it be time

                to heal me again...

    Let it be thee to

                break me again....

    But even so tomorrow ...

                I'll fall in love all over again"

     

Author's Note

Faith, Hope, Love. We all are scared of loneliness that's why even if it hurts we don't give up on it so easily and try to love again. Well that's that your suggestions and opinions are welcomed :)

Reviews

[Dr. YumnaKay]

"Cause the one she loved
was loved so much
that even love would run stale"

I feel connected to these lines too much.. Sometimes, it hurts too when the person we love is loved more by someone else than we love them.. I think falling in love again is something in our hands.. like we can choose whether we want that feat for us or not..

I loved the sentimentality in your poem. Very well penned, Luna :)

[Luna]

Thank you Yumna and I agree with you of course it is up to us to choose what makes us happy. And if that love can make us happy than its worth a shot. Thank you again for such a kind review :) be blessed

[Dr. YumnaKay]

Yes it is..
You're welcome! It was a pleasure reading your work 😊

[Luna]

Your too kind :) Thank you again

[Dr. YumnaKay]

You as well 😊

[Rama Masri]

I understand these lines all too well, males me sad, but I loved it.

[Luna]

I'm sorry to make you sad my friend and I'm happy you loved it. Love is the deepest feeling of a human it can't be conveyed completely and can't be endured when lost either. But after losing it we shouldn't regret it cause love teaches us a lot of things.
Thank you for your kind review :) Stay blessed

[Writer at last! Sky ~]

But even so tomorrow ...
I'll fall in love all over again"

Wonderful poem my friend love is all about losing yourself in the one you love :)

[Luna]

What you said is very true my friend. Glad you liked it :) Thank you very much

[Sonakshi Arora]

Let it be time
to heal me again...
Let it be thee to
break me again....
But even so tomorrow ...
I'll fall in love all over again"


Indeed very true! I absolutely loved the flow of the poem! Great!

[Luna]

Thank you very much. I'm glad you loved it :)

[Sonakshi Arora]

My pleasure!

[Robert Haigh]

We should never give up on the hope of finding love, even after suffering heartbreak. A heartfelt write.

[Luna]

Thank you very much Robert. Stay happy :)