Untitled

Darling, I'm scared of these blank pages ahead

But I'll still say "yes" to the ring you proposed

Cause I think it's best to move on

And look if the future is what I deserve

And if it's not at least I'll learn

Of life and love that will still burn

So be it a lesson or eternal love

I'll remember this day and those chirping dove's

For this is the day I connect to your heart

In your sadness, sickness and happiness

                     UNTIL DEATH DO US PART

Author's Note

I think something's still missing but if I thought too much my head would have caught fire. I was tired so... just wrote it the way it came out :)

Reviews

[Alice Maria]

I don't think anything is missin. Just don't use this as your actual wedding vows as there are seeds of doubt in the poem that your spouse wouldn't lie so much. I enjoyed reading this.

[Luna]

haha definitely not Alice. Don't worry I won't these lines. Thank you very much for reviewing :)

[Alice Maria]

No problem 😄

[Writer at last! Sky ~]

UNTIL DEATH DO US PART Y that makes this poem "Untitled" & special one. Great work Luna :)

[Tony Jordan]

I was first tempted to say this would make a great wedding vow/dedication but then some lines have such doubt at worst or pragmatism at best that I don't think it would be best received by a spouse.
Perhaps an internal vow - borne of a previously failed engagement/marriage.
I know whats missing - the title - joking.
I dont think theres anything missing tbh.
:)

[Luna]

Haha an internal vow yes I think that's what it is I am not so sure myself LOL. But thanks for the review :)