Melting Love

Only the cold can show you what warmth actually is

If I had the chance

to reason with you

Then we could make it better

Now it's up to you

Take my hand or push me

from these frozen bars

Or let me lead you 

slowly through the dark

Place your hand on my chest

Look it's beating fast

You are who you are now

And I'll accept your past

Let me heal your wounds

Throw away your cast

And if we have to die together

Then let this breath be our last

Don't run ahead, so far

It's hard to walk on ice

Don't let me go right now  (or else)

The pain in my heart will ignite

My aching heart was frozen

To melt it I needed time

But there's no need to wait till Summer now

Cause I've got your hand in mine

Reviews

[LapseOfMind]

Very nicely done, good job

[Luna]

Thank you very much.

[Kelly Scheppers]

The thought of love "melting" conjures up a warmth like no other. Such lovely verses, Luna...and the ending was perfectly written!

[Luna]

Thank you Kelly😏 I am glad you enjoyed it.

[Robert Haigh]

A poetically expressive write.

[Luna]

Thank you :)

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I like the general feeling behind this one.
Timing in love is everything and sometimes we fall for the one that thaws our heart but they move on from us before the thaw is complete because we've been so difficult. Such a s****y situation. I'm going to recommend that in the two place you use the word "than" that you change it to "then".

[Luna]

Thank you so much :) (And also thanks for the tip i am going to fix that in no time)

[Kuldeep desai]

Place your hand on my chest
Look it's beating fast
You are who you are now
And I'll accept your past..........

These lines are so touchy......can relate and the whole piece superbly written...I loved it...Thank you for sharing....

[Luna]

Thank you . I am very happy that you loved it and your welcome if it makes you smile I'll share plenty :)

[Terry O'Leary]

Love that lives is heat that breathes life...
Nice, warm and cozy poem!!

[Luna]

Thank you Terry :)

[Tony Jordan]

and ...wasn't it the universal kind of love that Aslan breathed from his chest that freed all of the creatures the Wicked Queen has frozen in Narnia? (Sorry Luna, just watched a certain movie there lol).
This is beautiful Luna. Holding hands is so romantic.

[Luna]

Haha no problem you can watch as many movies as you want, heck even I'll join you ;) . Thank you .

[Shabeeh Haider]

This is beautiful. The warmth of love can make the hardest and coldest heart melt.
Here its an aching heart that has been frozen.

[Writer at last! Sky ~]

My aching heart was frozen
To melt it I needed time
But there's no need to wait till Summer now
Cause I've got your hand in mine


I think it's coffee ☕ time. Since your words already melted the readers heart. Superb!

[Luna]

Haha thanks skyfall27 as long as you guys feel warmth from this I am happy. Btw that's my favorite stanza :)

[Writer at last! Sky ~]

lol Happy Christmas and wishing you a bright year ahead my friend . 🌻

[Luna]

Same here my friend Have a great Christmas :)

[Dr. YumnaKay]

This is beautiful! This is what most of us want right? To be with the one we love.. I liked reading this! Good job ☺

[Luna]

Thank you i wrote it when drinking tea yesterday and the tea made me feel warm. It was nice :)

[Dr. YumnaKay]

Yes well tea does have that effect on me too.. You are welcome 😊