Questions in a Bottle

Written November 20, 2006.

Put my thoughts into a bottle
pop the cork and let them out
what was meant to be a whisper
come out more like a shout
pieces of thought form a puzzle
put them together and figure out,
why does the world keep spinning,
when the truth has been snuffed out?
I guess the true question,
is why do we live in doubt?
put my thought back in the bottle
light the fuse, then put it out-

Reviews

[Cynthia]

Wow! That's a great poem!
The meaning and idea of this poem is really amazing,
a very deep poem :D
The last few lines made a very good ending!