Love Me to Death

Dont.....

Your love gave me life
Through the womb of a birthing pool

But you make me want to die
When you shower me with affection

Memories of your sudden unexpected wrath
Have me cherish every moment of your elegant smile

Author's Note

Just thoughts about water

Reviews

[Liza]

suffocation...of love
i like the symbolism
something so nurturing can cause your death as well
balance of everything is everything...

[momo]

interesting indeed how it can be percieved in so many ways

[Marie Harrison]

Very interesting. This had a maternal vibe to me. Enjoyed!