Love Me to Death

Dont.....

Your love gave me life
Through the womb of a birthing pool

But you make me want to die
When you shower me with affection

Memories of your sudden unexpected wrath
Have me cherish every moment of your elegant smile

Author's Note

Just thoughts about water

Reviews

[Neva Flores Smith - Cha..]

For some reason this put me in mind of a smothering parent. Well done!

[Coyote Poetry]

A powerful and strong poem. Description was amazing. Create beautiful words to describe the flow of life. A excellent poem.
Coyote

[Tate Morgan]

Had something like this happen to me today was turned upon by my best friend she does this occasionally and then recovers

[Tommy]

I would rather it rain than snow. lol. This is a fantastic write. If you hadn't said what it is about, I would have thought you were talking about a troublesome relationship with your mother, but in a way I guess you were. Mother earth that is.

Great Piece!
RLG,
Tommy

[Cassiopia Summers]

Amazing. (:

[Priyankaabhilaashi]

Intense..!!!

[MiidniightSoul]

Wow, your pome is amazing. Very beautifully written and love how you present water. Such an interesting idea. Great poem.

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. ah, it's amazing to stand under a water fall ... but no floods ... i agree ...

[A.Lee]

I think this could be attributed to a lot of different things. Something as simple as water or something more complex like a wavering relationship. Strong and thought provoking piece.

[Hippy]

beautiful, i strongly relate this to people/mother rather than water but i can see what you are trying to say