Mystical Eclipsable

An uncontrollable reflective subtlety...

 

Mystical matter unknown to thine eyes,

Eclipsable tatters winded harsh cries

Forgotten, the former, a remanant the latter

United in time, waiting the moment of scatter.

 

Mystical makeshift bounds unbounding

Eclipsable spheres rounds' surrounding

Released, the wisdom, knowledge of the wise

Concealed treasures lost beneath the skies.

 

Mystical memories discovered through the heart

Eclipsable senses light the dreams of ancient art

Secrets, hushed, guarded by truth's presence

Serving mankind's sin with atonement and penance.

 

Mystical mist of the harbringers of bliss

Eclipsable shifts of wars over hells pits

Surviving, the will, brought to being and rising.

Arriving, the call, sounded horn eternal biding.

Reviews

[nothing]

You have the way with words that some of the writers here should be jealous of. I know I am. You did a great job. I loved it. You write very well, and I lovethe way you put your words together and make them do an intimate little dance.

Truly Yours,
Sarah G. Whiteman

[Jazique]

third one down second line dose that sound strange? Well anyways it was good if my literary teacher read it "A"!

[My Fair Lady]

Rhythmatic motion in mystical form dances with Eclipsable partner so beautifully.

[luciddreamer]

This write is pulling at me...almost like tides that are rising ....thanks for sharing :)

[Goodbye]

I agree with Sarah - your words do dance about each other so very nicely.

Lovely write!

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fantastical piece with great rhyme and meter..really impressive :)

[Amanda]

Absolutely spectacular. This is one of those poems that you have to read at least three times through to fully experience. Very nicely done. *jealous*