Man Scratch

A stick and some mud...

 

A man,

Is he and only that,

For when he walks,

He runs right back.
A forgetful being.

Who is forgiven for being,

A creature of intention without seeing.

 

 

Reviews

[David W Moore III]

Great piece. Although I've known some men that weren't creatures of intention but just floated with the current.

[Vanesa Markovic]

This is wonderful, engaging from the first line!
Very well executed, and deeply powerful.
"A creature of intention without seeing"
...aren't we just.

[NoneOfYourBusiness akaK..]

spectacular composition~ engaing presentation~ movement with depth through and through~

[Alicia Schroeder]

This is a great write

[kuru]

"a forgetful being: who is forgiven for being"...that was the best...nice insight into our behavior

[em]

oh - this is an insight - an intense one at that - a tough one too - and the presentation - adds to the impact - yeah - i like what it does to my head!! - lots and lots to think about!

[Misty Blue Eyes]

ditto on what India Brooks says. its very thought-provoking

[India Brooks]

This is so wonderfully thought-provoking...

[My Fair Lady]

Nice. A look inside the mind of a man who knows himself. Nice.