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If i can't feel the pain...

If i can't feel the pain...

A Poem by RejectFalseIcons
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Something that basically exploded out of my head, just based off one line from a song, the first one, the rest of it is all me

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If I can't feel the pain there is no-one left to tell me it hurts 
Means the drugs and alcohol did their job
It means there is no one left to hurt me
There is no one willing to hurt me
There is no one who wants to hurt me
There is no one who can hurt me
It's not bad enough
Then my nerve endings are shot
I will want more
There isnt enough
I havent suffered enough
I havent suffered
I'm devoid of emotions

© 2010 RejectFalseIcons


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Thanks Grimmy, definantly what i was going for


Posted 13 Years Ago


I like this. In these few words you say, it holds alot of direct emotion

Posted 13 Years Ago


Like it.

Posted 13 Years Ago


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. brutally beautiful ... these explosions are needed ...


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Added on July 4, 2010
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RejectFalseIcons
RejectFalseIcons

NSW, Australia



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Hi, im Timothy, i write poetry, i also have it on deviantart, im not sure how often ill post here, im running low on a muse lately more..

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