A Tapestry of Decay

a poem, i like it

Wandering down these run down halls Building long condemned Patients all passed away Ghosts walking the halls Screams piercing the deathly silence You skin seems to be trying to crawl away Deep inside you know this danger Blackthorn asylum called to you A new patient Strapped in a dirty straight jacket Thrown into a dark corner This place is evil Your screams join the screams of the dead

Reviews

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. truly vivid and spooky ... yet very poignant ...

[M.Kilani]

nice piece , messy somehow though painful , good flow , though I like rhymed poems more
well done

[LivingDeath]

Wow, very detailed. You are talented in the way that you can portray a mental image into the readers mind. Each line I read I could see what was happening and that takes skill to do. You did a very good job with this piece. Good job :) great write