Paycheck be Damned

It is easy to forget that our personal problems are more often than not nothing but a drop in the bucket.

I clenched the wheel in my twisting fists, replaying the day’s events like a double spun reel.  Every day I plaster on that sarcastic grin, cutting like razors into my bulging cheeks.  Paycheck be DAMNED!  I’d pay that twice for nothing but a smile.  A light ahead as red as the hate and fury that cooked and spewed.  A dirty man’s distraction with cardboard in his hands stood staring broken and sunken.  I hate when they do this.  As if I owe them anything.  Green flashed and I lit the tires, glad to be back to my hard hearted stew.

Author's Note

My first submission - grammar and punctuation have always been my weakness. Any feedback (grammar or other) would be GREATLY appreciated!

Reviews

[JulianaSun]

A lot of pent up anger in this short story. Emotion is vital when writing and your words bristle with it. A very good first submission :) You should keep on writing, and trust your words and your talent.

[Gerr]

Thank you for the feedback, I appreciate the advice!