An Endless Echo

This is just something that came to me right on the spot theres a few i made a while back that actually are alot like this one but wrote differently

What am I? who am I?

Am I just a pawn in someone's game?

Am I a hunter or someone else's aim?

As they point there arrow at me

I can sense it yet can't see

Do I stay? or do I run?

What direction are they aiming from?

I can feel my heart pounding like a drum

As I run and jump to find a hiding place

i see a big tree really wide at the bass

I sprinted and jumped to hide behind the tree's trunk

I don't sense it anymore, maybe I'm in luck

When did this start? When will it end?

I have been dodging this hunter for centuries

Many lives i have lived ending under this very tree

Please someone set me free from the crazy cycle

Calling out to the savour of the now through thick hail

Please hear me your the only one who can free me

You can find me under this large tree

I will wait as long as i can for you to finally come

When you get real close you'll hear a faint hum

Your the only one who can hear her

This is my message to you my beautiful healer

Author's Note

I wrote this right on the spot i think its good but sense i have written alot of poems or lyrics that have this same message its kinda werid to me lols but im putting on here anyways hope you all like it

Reviews

[I Am Svetlana]

It should be "As they point thier arrow at me." And "you're the only one who can hear her." Other than that, this is quite a haunting piece, being hunted by another.

[Justin]

that was really good :) the way you set it up with asking questions was awesome :) u did a great job :)

[Reina Love]

Thank you Justin :)

[Relic]

In my mind, I can see one of those really old black and white photos of a man, maybe in his thirties looking poor or uninterested. Meanwhile, his body rests under that old tree in which he is condemned to repeat his death over and over. Real good poem Reina. :)

[Reina Love]

Well thank you so very much good imagination there though for me its a lady not a man

[Relic]

Just goes to show you never know. haha

[Reina Love]

Yep and I believe there's more to the story of this lady too its odd for others but to me I feel like she's apart of me apart of who I was in another life or something. I don't really talk about it cause not everyone can understand some say it's only my imagination others say I'm crazy and there's those select few who choose to believe me.

[Relic]

You don't feel suffocated do you?

[Reina Love]

Why you ask that?

[Relic]

If you were buried in a previous lifetime.....might it replay itself through events in your life?

[Ashadan]

I like the structure and the message it has inside =)

[Reina Love]

And what might you think is the message if you don't mind me asking? im just curious

[Maumil Mehraj]

That was such a beautiful piece, and the imagery you created was brilliant. Just one think, I think it should've been "their" instead of "there" in the fourth line :)
Maumil

[Reina Love]

Oh ya thanks for pointing that out i typed it so fast looking back an forth from my phone to the computer that i didn't even notice that haha. As for the imagery well really like i said above this type of message has been basically haunting me for a few years but this one is a bit different then the others. Each time i flow with this message there's something new added to it like my mind is finding the pieces to a jigsaw puzzle of my very essence. I know that kinda sounds funny but hay everyone in a way is odd this is just one of the odd things about me.

[Maumil Mehraj]

Thats true, I believe that whatever we are meant to be is revealed to us in portions, and when the time is right. And yes, everybody has their distinct personality, but everyone will identify with your poem, i am guessing! ;)

[Reina Love]

Lols thanks :)