Never ending cycle

This one is one i made towards my Dad

Every day, hour, minute, second every week, month, and year

It's the same old story with you an there seem's to be no cure

Why don't you fully listen to any word's we have to say

You yell "why you doing this to me?" an storm away

Why don't you stop to think life is ruff, your not the only one

You are older then I, don't you know? you don't know you can't just say you won?

Listen all the way never speak before another is done

When you do that's when we yell "Listen!","Get away from me" you yell 

Then you say "Your gonna give me a heart attack" like we're putting you through hell

Your giving yourself a heart attack my dear Father

I only speak the truth as I'm your loving Daughter

Author's Note

I just edited it now i believe it is done :)

Reviews

[Justin]

that was really great ;) it has alot of emotion in it and tells a great story :) great job :)

[Reina Love]

Thank you for the appreciation 😊

[Justin]

your welcome, keep it up and i will continue to read your writing :)

[Ashadan]

Short yer very clever =)
Your giving yourself a heart attack my dear Father
I only speak the truth as I'm your loving Daughter
and actually I like these lines that created a good ending the this write-up

[Reina Love]

I thought so too im about to post a new one that i just wrote up right on the spot it just came to me

[Maumil Mehraj]

Personally, i love it when things are a bit mismatched and not orderly.
"Every day, hour, minute, second every week, month, and year". First the amount of time is decreasing (day, hour, minute, second) and then increasing (week, month, and year).
Lovely read.

[Ilerah]

Nice, just make sure to have commas when listing the hour, minute etc. Other than that a very good read.

[Reina Love]

I believe i just fixed that haha and thank you i have had this one on my phone for a little bit thought hay why not :)

[Ilerah]

Yah, may as well post it.

[Reina Love]

Right? haha