Sunshine

a poem for a very sweet girl.

Have you felt a Rei of sunshine?

caressing your skin

warming your body

brightening up the darkness

you yearn for more

you lose your inhibitions

and your clothes

let the light lick your whole body

it leaves a tan

so you can remember it all day

Reviews

[Nisreen]

And so the sun leaves it mark everywhere it goes

I enjoyed this write

[JC]

I like the passion, the play on words and the flow. great job.

[John Anderson]

This is unique and so beautifully penned. Great wonderful poem!

[Fire Mage Andrea]

There's quite a bit of truth to this poem. People actually do stay out in the sun for as long as possible, sometimes even longer than they should because of the sun's intoxicating warmness.
Like what you put about the tan at the end. Again, it is actually true.

[Roy]

Warmth of light. That's amazing I like this lots.

[kimmy]

This is very nice. I think like on days like today where it is cloudy and ugly; it is getting ready to snow. I think this can brighten up someone's day:) Nice job.

[Phoenix]

Everyone can use a little extra sunshine in their lives...beautiful poem. Leaves me with a smile thinking of my favorite ray of sunshine.

[Mary C]

Your words are beautiful

[Me]

great poem

[Janice Ann]

How flippin' awesome and a hint of sexiness! This is such a sweet Rei of sunshine!!