Sunshine

a poem for a very sweet girl.

Have you felt a Rei of sunshine?

caressing your skin

warming your body

brightening up the darkness

you yearn for more

you lose your inhibitions

and your clothes

let the light lick your whole body

it leaves a tan

so you can remember it all day

Reviews

[Jeff]

A very enjoyable write.

[Norma M Sutton]

Short and sweet. I like the analogy! One small spelling error inhibitions instead of inhabitions.

[Marie]

Nicely done Rei. It has a very nice flow and everything is spelled correctly. Keep it up.

[Livenrite]

Loved it...was short, sweet and enjoyable to read:) thanks for sharing.

[Colleen C Dunphy]

Lovely, it makes me jealous of the girl it was written for.

[SweetPeachesAlways]

Oh My God! And I love, love, love the photo!

[Coyote Poetry]

I need a day when a rei of sunshine can give me some color. I like this poem. Made me wish for a day at Big Surf, Ca. A excellent poem. Thank you.
Coyote

[Haifa]

I like it, I like how you describe the sunshine and the day and how the light comes on your body. I felt the moment. Great poem

[Kon™]

love this, it's a very sweet and warming poem. I like how the sunshine is so much more in this piece, great description and lasting effect. Keep it up, you did a great job with this :)