Saved

All thanks to a perfect lover.

Touched on the surface,

Drowning within,

Where one phaze is ending,

A new shall begin,

I must be touched deeper,

Embrace, don't let go,

I was once clueless,

Now touched, I do know,

My vision extended,

Beyond prior short views,

Your gift is much needed,

So now I must choose,

Continue to drown,

In the black seas within,

Or grab a willing, wanting hand,

And hold tight 'til we win,

I've finally chosen,

Once and for all,

Those black seas will dry up,

For you won't let me fall.

Reviews

[Dani California]

Mandy, this is outstanding. I love the rhyme and meter.. flows wonderfully. It is a great feeling to know we're not alone in the world. Well penned! A pleasure to read. Thank you.