Gone.

I really think this is good, please check it out, I'd extremely apriciate comments.

There's so much all around me,

So many people,

But even in the middle I feel I'm at the same dead-end,

And once someone's found me,

I hope it's not too late,

I hope it's not all too far gone to finally feel a friend,

And I'm gone,

Here's another moment where I am gone,

Here's another tear,

I bet you can sing along, I know we all know this song, where everything feels so wrong,

Yeah, I am gone,

I am gone.

Author's Note

It isn't done, of course :)