(For the record- ^ need more "types/genres" availible) Untitled; revise.

(For the record- ^ need more "types/genres" availible) Untitled; revise.

A Story by Mandy
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More later.

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Revise # 15 - ONLY worry about this one. Disregaurd the past four.

You go from sloppy lectures in a stolen microphone, to yellow-eyed varment, to feilds in the middle of nowhere, somehow in stupidity BACK from farms and barns and in a giant building full of staff infection floating around everywhere, caught in the aura of a dark evil creature again, (something about the money- think), to some creepy dirt road where there have been spottings of big foot, with history repeating constantly along the way- in various forms. You realize that sardining with low lifes in tornado ally isn't quite your style, and the potential of a half-demonic baby is just out of the question, so where is left?

 

Sections 4, 5, and 8 need intense reviewing. WILL revise soon.

© 2009 Mandy


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