Reluctant Sunset

 

The sun stretches out

Clawing at the cool, blue clouds

Straining to be seen

Reviews

[Ryan Gilroy]

The sunset often is the birth of something new and ending of something tragically only a few hours old. I do enjoy your piece of poetry seeing that it provides a brillant piece of wisdom. I find it simple and to the point for this piece of poem about a simple sunset which makes more an even more profound statment.

[Blackbirdsong]

You make the sun sound very cat-like, at least that's what I imagined when I read this. A cat stretching out with its tail in the air and its claws foreward clawing at the earth before finally relaxing and then laying down for the night. Beautiful imagery.

[Laura E. Aranda]

A Haiku.... I am impressed! I am finding people here writing them everywhere and am so impressed. I want to write one!!!!!! This one is going to be added to my collection! Thanks!

[Ice Queen of the Vampir..]

This is a beautiful haiku. I can clearly see this image in my mind. Lovely write!!!

Heather

[James K. Blaylock]

I really loved this Haiku! I'll have to go read more of your work now.