A Lonely Passenger

One's view on loneliness and depression greatly depends on their own experiences with the two. For this reason I tried to leave a lot of room for interpretation. Hope you like it.

As the train came in slow,

In air in which water was too cool as to flow,

I dismounted a lonely passenger. 

Author's Note

What do you think?

Reviews

[Tyler Mraz]

I enjoy this piece because of its superficial simplicity, granting the reader various ways to interpret it. Nice first writing.

[RegWrites]

Thank you Tyler.

[Tyler Mraz]

Don't mention it Reggie. I suppose this indicates I have exceeded Jaris' friendship status. Im your better friend