Mother Earth

Mother Earth

 

She etches the beauty of nature

Along the corridor of time.

I am unto her earth

A leaf upon a clinging vine.

 

I feel her subtle essence

In her gentle breeze.

I touch her ever so softly,

As she brushes across me tenderly.

 

Breathe in and hold each breath of her scent.

Savor her taste upon the buds of your tongue,

As she thrives in the quiet before dawn

Breathing together as one.

Reviews

[cynthiabuhainbaello]

Beautiful verses that make the details of nature come alive - brilliant writing!

[WindSong]

Thank you for your valued comment!

[Sami Khalil]

She etches the beauty of nature
along the corridor of time.
Very poetic.

[WindSong]

Thank you!

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome.

[Debbie_Philly]

Gorgeous !!! You have a beautiful talent of bring the words on page to life in the mind !! :)

[WindSong]

Thank you for your valued comment!

[Chris]

Sweet images and tones... goes well with a morning's sun and coffee.

[WindSong]

Sounds good! Thank you!

[zainul]

'A leaf upon a clinging vine.'
The beauty of this very common yet very uncommon scene is indescribable.
Great poetic work.
Congratulations!!!

[WindSong]

Thank you for gracious and valued comment!

[zainul]

Very nice of you,dear poet.

[Audrey Howitt]

I don't know what I could possibly add to the accolades below, except to add my admiration for your poetic voice--just such beautiful writing!!!

[Allen Smuckler]

Imagination 101 said it best...couldn't help but see her review...breathtaking...literally....took my breath away...
every word, line, stanza floated my spirit along...It all felt so purrfect and surreal
Everything felt so tender and loving.
Some really beautiful, original wording
""corridor of time", "brushes across me", "hold each breath of her scent"
loved it Windsong....loved it
allen

[KATHY SUE SILLS]

This was simply breath-taking in each word that I absorbed!

[Neva Flores Smith - Cha..]

A beautiful poem and the subtle rhyming in the first stanza is mesmerizing.

[Hotwater]

What a lovely poem... gentle and soft... may I say "old fashioned?"... or "old fashioned style"... yes, that's better... I like it.
*bird*