Summer's Last Rose

Summer's Last Rose

 

A summer breeze on an autumn wind

 

The essence of thee ebbs with the tide

 

Winds brush lightly upon my soul

 

My heart weeps! 

 

The sea winds still blow

 

A flame burns on the edge of time

 

By a memoir left for thee

 

Love!

 

An elusive butterfly

 

Etched by mystique and intrigue

 

Our paths crossed by destiny

 

A summer breeze on an autumn wind

 

With summer's last rose by the sea

Reviews

[Tate Morgan]

Very beautiful rendition

[KATHY SUE SILLS]

Soft, tender and breathtaking imagery of summer fading into autumn!

[Marie Harrison]

Such a beautiful picture
your created in our minds.
Although I'm not ready to
let summer pass yet.
I love my summer
Beautiful poem!

[Cascara (aka Sprint Goe..]

Beautiful write!

[Kat]

What beautiful imagery, I love the flow!

[Allen Smuckler]

This was such a beautiful, well written ode..
your imagery throughout was captivating and ethereal...
I could feel the summer breeze, autumn wind, and flame burning
I could hear the ebbing tide and winds brushing..
I could smell the summer's last rose
but most of all I could imagine the elusive butterfly etched by mystique and intrigue...exuding passion and love.
Terrific write, Windsong
allen

[Muse]

Love passing her by like the changing seaosons. This is a gorgeous write!