This Time

This Time

 

I want to bathe with you

In the sultry air

Walk hand in hand

In the flow of the sea

I want to be with you

This day

This night

This time

I want to feel our touch

Your breath in mine

I want to hold you close

So close to me

Our hearts shall beat as one

I want to embrace this feeling of love

So deep

So much

This day

This night

You're mine

Beneath a beautiful moonlit sky

We lie down in the sand by the sea

Melting into one another

This night

This time 

Reviews

[cynthiabuhainbaello]

Remarkably expressed in romantic and deeply passionate words, this poem presents love in all its exquisite beauty and depth. I like the images of the sea scenery, and combined with the longings of love, these make the mood truly romance-filled.

[WindSong]

Thank you for your gracious and valued comment!

[Allen Smuckler]

wonderfully tender write Windsong...
heartfelt and passionately expressed.
I took a breath and quietly exhaled
Beautiful
allen

[Tate Morgan]

A tender write I like it

[Marie Harrison]

Oh what a balmy night
I can see this played out in
with a hint of sweet
jasmine clinging to the
humid air. What a
loving poem!

[An owl on the moon]

Just the most beautiful expression of two melting into one... that dance of life... You've created the most perfect moment!

[Tony]

This is hot and sultry, a great expression of need. Very sensual are your emotions in this poem. That is how I read this. Picture perfect

[Chris]

I came back... and its still as good!

[Neva Flores Smith - Cha..]

A beautiful poem of love!

[Raven Starhawk]

Wonderfully original. I read this and feel its depth.