Path of Gold

Path of Gold

 

I walk along a path

Between the shadows of the trees

Beneath their bending limbs

I seek their warm and gentle breeze

 

I love the wonder of spring

In its beauty, I behold!

The scent of early morning dew

The center of its soul

 

I walk along a path of emerald

To a glistening path of gold

I bathe in wet sand by the sea

Its soft and gentle winds I hold  

Reviews

[Cherrie]

This poem is soft as early morning breaking day, wonderful images that invite me along.

[Muse]

The words played right off my tongue. What a beautiful read!

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

A wonderful picture of paradise you paint... a poem that soothes the soul.

[Stella]

This is a beautiful poem! The words flow so well and I can visualize the "path of gold" in my head.

[Wolf's Dark Song]

This flows wonderfully with fantastic rhyming. I felt like I was there, walking through the trees and enjoying all the nature around me.

[Sunflower/Sara Kendrick]

Enjoyed this expressive work this eve..Great rhythm and rhyme..I am glad that I chose this one to read..Sunflower

[Daytonight]

So very beautiful! I love the images you paint here. Well done.

[Plagued Monumentally]

I love the rhyme scheme in this. It was beautifully written also, keep up the good work there WindSong! Looking forward to reading lots more of your writing.

[OT]

ahh so melodic - the rhymes - the meter - all so tight and flowing - "In its beauty, I behold!
The scent of early morning dew,
The center of its soul." - you have such a poetic voice in your works! nice!

[Neva Flores Smith - Cha..]

I behold the beauty of the spring, holding its soft and gentle winds...beautiful!