Path of Gold

Path of Gold

 

I walk along a path

Between the shadows of the trees

Beneath their bending limbs

I seek their warm and gentle breeze

 

I love the wonder of spring

In its beauty, I behold!

The scent of early morning dew

The center of its soul

 

I walk along a path of emerald

To a glistening path of gold

I bathe in wet sand by the sea

Its soft and gentle winds I hold  

Reviews

[cynthiabuhainbaello]

A wonderful poem to read, so soothing and vivid in the picturesque images presented. Enjoyed reading this very much. Thank you for writing it.

[WindSong]

Thank you for your lovely comment! I shall stop by to read more of your poetry!

[cynthiabuhainbaello]

Welcome, it's a pleasure.

[Tina Kline]

Your words and imagery are very beautiful, so is the feel of this poem. The joy of warmer days to celebrate the natural world around us. Splendid writing.

[WindSong]

Thank you for your valued comment!

[Tina Kline]

You're very welcome. :)

[PrincessZeldaWannabe]

Love every word! Brilliantly beautiful, magical, wonderful, and just plain enchanting!

[Marie Harrison]

I walk along a path of emerald,
To a glistening path of gold;
I bathe in wet sand by the sea,
Its soft and gentle winds I hold.

Wonderful poem. I enjoyed your golden path.

[Tony]

This has excellent rhyme scheme and a whimsical feel to it, serene and soft.
I love the last stanza best, maybe because I am a sea person and can visualize your words.

[KATHY SUE SILLS]

Love the serene feeling that come over me as the words escaped my mouth!

[Vinod Kumar U K]

Holt Path towards calm...

[Art Sun]

nice thoughts...Nature is filled with those views of beauty, making for those paths of emerald and gold...

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a meander through the seasons through a poets eyes is always a magical experiene..delightful

[KAREN]

Beautiful! Grwat flow and wonderful imagery. Gives me a sense of peace and happiness.