So Long Ago

So Long Ago

 

 

A glimmering diamond

A kiss

A cut of passion

Bestowed upon my soul

Your lips pressed gently

Upon my cheek

Warm and tender

So long ago

A loving embrace

Forever lingers deep in me

The sun dips, slips slowly away

Dripping across a shade of gold

A lovely season in the midst

Glistening in the sunlit haze

With a slight and sultry

Summer wind

My heart is melting

Breathing in the scent of you

In the afterglow within

Reviews

[Audrey Howitt]

This poem took my breath away! Lovely, but more--waiting for the next word to get there before I am done with the word in front of it. Beautifully done!

[Creepy Swine Guy]

This is stunning. The scene that you set it breathtaking and the prose are right where they should be, not overly sappy but wonderfully romantic. Perfect!

[Wolf's Dark Song]

Such vivid and beautiful imagery. Love the hint of passion in this poem and all the lovely views of nature all brought together.

[Art Sun]

what a glistening view of those memories from within...even those thoughts of yours make one sense the arromatic pleasures of your poem...nice

[Hotwater]

very passionate, a poem to grace the pages of any poetry book.
*bird*

[KAREN]

I breathed in every drop of this poem. It is romantic and warms the heart.

[Ladysue]

this is gorgeous...so poetic and what a lovely ending...just beautiful writing..

[Chris]

Soft, clear, and sweet... a gentle aftertaste... a sense of half-closed eyes and spooning dreams.

Chris

[Daytonight]

Such wonderful imagery you have used in this poem. It takes me along with you. Well done. Keep on penning.