So Long Ago

So Long Ago

 

 

A glimmering diamond

A kiss

A cut of passion

Bestowed upon my soul

Your lips pressed gently

Upon my cheek

Warm and tender

So long ago

A loving embrace

Forever lingers deep in me

The sun dips, slips slowly away

Dripping across a shade of gold

A lovely season in the midst

Glistening in the sunlit haze

With a slight and sultry

Summer wind

My heart is melting

Breathing in the scent of you

In the afterglow within

Reviews

[OT]

your poems read as if a sigh - soft and flowing - always so well crafted and pleasurable to read - the almost lingering rhyme added a little beat to it too - nice!

[what-the-frick]

I could literally taste every word .. love the imagery and emotions this portrays. Excellently written!

[Raven Starhawk]

You have a mighty sense of well rounded brilliance. This poem is magnificent.

[Becky C Strukamp]

A breathtaking poem. I Loved it from beginning to end. One of my favorites now. You penned these words with precision. Excellent write. Thank you for writing and sharing your gift.

[Dreamer]

very beautiful and sweet. A side of love we don't really see very often. Good piece

[KATHY SUE SILLS]

Beautiful soft tender romance!

[Patient Poet (Yos)]

My heart is melting

Breathing in the scent of you,

In the afterglow

Within.



Just beautiful and tender , Love has so many ways to appear , you capture it beautifully , Yossi

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

*Breathing a sigh* that was so blissfully sweet and tender. A true Gem of a poem.

[Ruth]

Oh wow! Yes! This is perfect love...such vivid detail...I can literally become immersed in such tones of beauty! So enjoyed this! xx

[anne p. murray- LadeeAn..]

So enchanting. It evolked many similar memories of moments that still breathe to my soul