Soft Winds

Soft Winds

 

Soft winds blow the petals aloft

A single rose across your heart

 

A bouquet so eloquent

In the garden shall not depart

 

A season's mystifying scent

 

Soft fragrant mists

Light showers

Blossoms and amethyst

 

Wisps of lavender brush upon your soul

The weeping willows gently blow

Reviews

[Becky C Strukamp]

A Soft gentle poem. Lovely to read! Beautifully penned!

[KATHY SUE SILLS]

The imagery was so beautifully vivid and done that I could see it clearly in my mind! Excellent

[KimLove "The Beautiful ..]

I love this description of the wind so beautiful I can almost feel it kiss my skin. xx

[knightcall]

I definitely see the evidence of Neruda in this one. Your poems have a consistent quality in that there always is a feeling of softness to them. Whooooossh

[OT]

ah what great flow this has - the words - soft - it all just ripples along - a nice rhyme - and not easy rhymes either which I always like (mist/amethyst) - great stuff!

[KAREN]

Beautiful with great imagery, it was like I could feel the breeze and smell the lavender.

[annie minus]

Simply gorgeous, it reminds me of a secret garden. I love how it holds soft sounds like a gentle whispering breeze and "mists" and "amethyst" - great rhyme, excellent poem. Annie :)

[Daytonight]

What lovely imagery you used to develop this beautiful poem. Light and airy feeling. Well done. Keep on penning.

[Sukriti Suki]

so subtle so pretty...right from the font to the words used to the emotion expressed...this is just so tender and soft.

[Sunflower/Sara Kendrick]

Very expressive and descriptive work..Enjoyed reading this morn..Sunflower