Picture perfect

I wanna make love. . . in the darkroom.

I tend to blend in this tyme I spend

Struggling to befriend each constant trend

Changing for insurance of no misunderstandings

I dislyke my demeaner for it steams too demanding

 

I see light inside the darkroom

I am swept away by nature's broom

This flat light day makes beauty hard to hold

The lens is swollen and the atmosphere is bold

 

I see beyond your eyes; I am far from ordinary

The world and I never meet on the contrary

My capture of you makes tyme stand still

My hands sculpt you gracefully with my loading reel

 

My nature is your land in another realm

I am far more in pursuit of what I can caress on film

Color is great but Black and White is far from a low blow

I'll dream in my dreams while making love to a photo

 

By: B. G. R.

Finished: 8/26/2008 9:44pm

Author's Note

A few words i wrote in photography class. I am becoming one with the photo to connect with the camera.

Reviews

[TamiViolet]

This could be read in several layers Reeses, a technique which I find stimulating. Seeing light in a darkroom... quite poetic my dear, for imperfections are hidden. However, I think imperfections are perfect if that makes sense. Truly a very creative piece, another quality which is enlightening.
Beautiful work!
X

[Kristina]

this is hot lady!!! Very original, I also "lyke" the way you spelled dislyke and tyme. You put your stamp on this poem and I totally felt it. I like the way you write. Will be reading more : )

[Kena Dawn Augustine]

OOOH, that's original. like it. i know, sometimes our artistic crafts can be an obsession. i understand where you are coming from. great choice of words and metaphors. thanks for sharing.

kena

[siri]

you are a master at poetry your style is so unique and awesome this piece flowed brilliantly high five for being creativly brilliantly awesome im looking forward to more!

[☮]

Yo... this is hot on so many levels. The use of metaphor, analogy, rhyme scheme and personification. This poem is an English course, lol.

Loved the personification of a camera. The rhyme flowed perfectly and the passion was present.

Top notch as always.

[Angel's Lady]

I am far more in pursuit of what I can caress on film

Great write! Beautiful words that sum up the whole picture for us all to see...

Hey, congrats on winning the Chocolate Contest! ;)

[A LaDy NaMeD D]

lol you know, we are so much alike it's creepy. *black and whites are favorites though*. It reminds me of when i'm in a darkroom developing film. I liked this, it was sort of different from your norm, but you can tell it was written by you because your style is still present. *did that make any sense?*

Danni J

[Last Lying Look]

Wow. I really liked this poem. Such good wording and structure.
Excellent job!