Rhymeless

I'm attempting to express myself without rhyming. Maybe then will i truly know what I'm feeling. . .

Well, how to begin my description on my feelings?

I love you, I hate you, I start over again

I live, i die, I fail, I succeed and still can't escape love

I don't want love but when i'm around you, its there

Better yet, when i'm with you, love is everywhere

I'm skating on top of the clouds knowing that you are reachable

Still I don't get any sleep no more

Used to sleep because i knew that when i would awake, you were there

Atleast somewhere in my dreamed reality

I guess I should kinda just let it go

Okay, I will

But hidden feelings never die and I just thought that I should let myself know

that I don't love you for a show

In all accuracy, i'm moving on realizing what you want

Maybe i'm realizing what you need

Or what I need

Wow, i can feel my heart bleed

Well, thats how i feel about love

It's not complete but that's all my mind gives me

No sadness for I was sad many moons ago

Smiling, just wanting happiness

I'll figure it out. . .Next lyfetyme.

 

By: B. G. R.

Finished: 07/16/2008 6:47pm

Reviews

[LadyLove]

Good that your wished to work it out this way...a thoughtful heartcleaning happens when writing. But know your heart in this lifetime...if you can.That you say..." ...I just thought that I should let myself know.." shows the restraint to think this out before any more words are said. Such powerful things as speech cannot be taken back once said. So, you speak of all the things on your mind and each thought is connected to the other even if they feel disjointed in your heart; The confusion is evident here. True, to know what you really want...to weigh all facets. To say, "I'll figure it out...next lifetime." is a statement I feel of how much and how long you ponder and feel the answer is still elusive or unknown. Would you take a chance for love...or not...and how much is it worth to do so? Huge questions you raise in yourself.

[Troy Baham Jr.]

why not this lifetime? geez i didn't know you wrote about love so much.

i understand what was going on with the title here. cuz i know when i first started doing poetry i thought everything had to rhyme and that's why everything i wrote was either rap lyrics or sounded like rap lyrics. i'm glad you're trying to get away from that and you're trying something new.