Mend me

Well uh, I just don't know. I want that one kiss. Don't know why. Its lyke in my poem When i said, "I need to know that we're not meant to be." Mend me. I have a few rhyming schemes i may add in there.

I learned that I don't need to see

If you and I are meant to be

I'll continue to run the streets

Searching for a remedy

 

I'll heal with the balance of tyme

No dwelling on these scars of mine

I'll get my Bachelors Degree

Still feeling that missing part of me

 

I'll dream of you night after night

Sweating and screaming lyke I'm going insane

I see your image in the midst of the rain

My heart stops and my soul takes flight

 

I'll cry myself to sleep

thinking of what I was too sane to say

Your presence makes me weak

Yet I could never wish you away

 

I'll drown in love and offer no plea

Just Swim to my lips and mend me

 

By: B. G. R.

Finished: 07/14/2008 10:53

 

 

Reviews

[LadyLove]

It's a beginning...to see where we stand...to heal from the certain knowledge of which way we should go. Your poem is heartfelt and true of what is on your mind. To heal you just need to know your direction and not remain stagnant to one thought or pain on the road of life. You say that here..."Not dwelling on these scars of mine, I'll get my bachelor's degree"...continuance despite all! Gather your strength and stay open in heart for any and all opportunities if they feel right. I love that you put your feelings so openly here; this is you on earth. Blessings!

[universalove]

I READ YOUR POEMS AND UNDERSTAND THAT LIFE IS NEGATIVE N POSITIVE ENERGY. ALL ONE CAN DO IS LIVE . I ENJOY IT.

[Troy Baham Jr.]

the flow to this one seemed weird to me. but other than that i still enjoyed. some of your lines seemed somewhat random too. but maybe that's just how you meant it to be