How i feel

tick tock. . .

I have 30 minutes to tell you how i feel but i can do it in 2

I can make it easy and start with I-Love-you

What more can be said or written

I carry you in my spirit and keep you warm lyke newborn kittens

 

I wake up in the morning and my brain thinks your being

4get the sunlight, it is you i'd rather be seeing

Thank God for blessing me with the knowledge of your existence

I step forward to receive you without resistance

 

Then i grow angry thinking of how you suffer

They lie to me and you would expect it to make me tougher

It makes me stronger right after I escape from being weak

It encourages me right after I forget how to speak

 

Then its over and I get even smarter

I guess i should've paid attention to what my father tried to teach his daughter

If I wasn't stubborn, i wouldn't bother

With the ignorance of lyfe that makes my madness hotter

 

So i go on to thank you and them both

Sometymes I don't remember who i should thank most

The negative killed me with a trembling fist

Yet your love staggers and gives me sight through the mist

You are missed

From your touch to you kiss

 

 

By: B. G. R.

Finished: 07/09/2008 11:52pm

 

 

Reviews

[universalove]

sometimes that`s the way it goes. i got something from this poem that lets me know that there is always hope. very good.

[StriDe]

So this is how you feel about me?lol.