Trapped in neutrality

expressing myself on the issue of a state of mind that is being discovered. . .

Once again I examine the thought of the eyes being the windows of your soul

My desire grows as my lids deeply unfold

Trapped in a foreign existence i'm told

I only find peace when my eyes have closed

Running away from the truth some say but I know what's real

It will take more than ridicule to depict what I feel

I can't change who I am or forge my way through fate

I can only prepare and write out the mistakes i will make

I think back and my past is what it is

I do what I do to separate my feelings from a kid's

I am who I am to prove that i owe the world nothing

Reflecting on my indifference shows that I stand for something

I was born into a world of hatred

Neutrality freed me but I couldn't take it

Instead of embracing my savior with open arms, I fled

Captured, I can no longer be more than undead

Lyfe killed me and neutrality made me immortal

Walking into a lyfe with a never ending portal

I face the demons that have climbed upon my back

I am better than you because I have what you lack

I have the power to take lyfe and twirl it around

My hands are soft and my teeth will have you bound

I am inluv with my words because they are the lyfe in me

Might as well enjoy my cage of enjoyment as I bathe in neutrality. 

 

By:B. G. R.

finished: 10:55pm 07/01/2008 

 

Reviews

[Silent Kim aka mizmetap..]

Girrrrl! You got the stuff. You wrote an outstanding poem here. I am so happy I choose this one to read. The words you use to complete your rhyms are masterful.

I only find peace when my eyes have closed- so true when the reality world stinks so bad.

Lyfe killed me and neutrality made me immortal
Walking into a lyfe with a never ending portal

My favorite line. Excellent. I will be reading you evry chance i get.

[Muddy B.]

B.THIS IS BEAUTIFUL..........I SWEAR I LOVE IT.AND THE TOPIC MAKES ME EAGER TO WANT MORE!! I LOVE THE WAY YOU INTENSELY YET DEFENSIVELY TACKLED NEUTRALITY!!!YOU JUST OPENED MY EYES TO SOME THINGS THAT I NEED TO FACE WITHIN MYSLEF.ITS BEAUTIFUL

[Judy Price]

It makes me sad that there is so much hate and sorrow in your life. I can only hope you find something to sing about or at least hold onto. We all need a little light once in awhile. You do express it very vividly!