Free

This is a work in progress

Too many times I've come undone
I'm beginning to think your the only one
who understands me
You see right through me
you get me so completely

I think I finally know
Who I'm supposed to be
We were meant to be...
we were meant to be
free

Free from the burdens of yesterday
Free from the choices that keep us chained
Free from the lies we choose to lead
Free to be you and free to be me

Too many times I drown in sorrow
I'm tired of waiting for the light of tomorrow
You understand
You've been there too
Come take my hand we'll make it through

Reviews

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

Your writing is so heartfelt, you take me on a journey.
This piece is also very emotional, romantic and from the heart, the best poems do come from the heart.
Your rhyming is brilliant, comes naturally, doesn't feel at all forced.
I loved the read.
Keep writing, I like your work :)