Daughter

Love is shown in different ways, even mothers throughout the age.

She grew up fast,
And now I'm slow,
The time has past,
And now I know,
That every memory will never perish,
They Will always be precious to hold and to cherish,
From a child she did grow,
To the beautiful women I now know,
The Funny laugh that she did bear,
Made me giggle with love and care,
Her clumsy, messy personality,
Grew to something full of love and charity,
From the still pictures I still hold,
I still see her heart of gold,
When she hugs me and her eyes fill with water,
I still see my smiling daughter.

Reviews

[Vasilees Sybissyl]

You've written such heartfelt words, they almost make me want to cry. A beautiful poem is what you've put up right here. The descriptions of the girl are so accurate and powerful. And of course,not to say, so beautiful. Keep it up!

Love,
Vasilees.

[Red swallow]

Thanks so much I really hope more people give more reviews to tell me what they thought and how I could improve in the future
Thanks again x
Hat out🎩

[Red swallow]

Thanks I've fixed it
I must of missed it
Hat 🎩 Out!

[The Iron Horseman]

Very nice. I have daughters too, so I know exactly how you feel! :)
One small typo. I think line three should read -
'The time has passed.'
Keep up the good work.