summer breeze

A peom about love that every one deserves to have

The summer breeze reminds me of you,
Your loving smile and your eyes of blue,
Your heart is silver and your hair is gold,
My love for you is strong and bold,
You hold on to me like you'll never let me go,
We're bound together our love will grow,
Your bright and funny,
your soal is sweeter than honey,
Your skin is soft and smoothe like cream,
But I can only dream,
Because your loving smile isn't true,
The summer breeze reminds me of you,

Reviews

[Gee]

Unrequited love methinks. A few spelling errors but like this

[Red swallow]

Thank I'll change them

[Elli]

In the feels, I relate so much. ;-;