Fatally With You

A song I wrote

This feeling I hold in my hands,

The rhythmatic beating of my heart.

The cries I send over this land,

Forgiving myself for what I want to start.

Because I'm fatally in love with you,

I'm magically in love with you.

I'm desperately in love with you,

I'm fatally in love with you.

None of the things on life's run

Are as beautiful as what I see in you.

Purple mountains outlined by the golden sun

Cannot compare to what you do.

Because I'm fatally in love with you,

I'm magically in love with you.

I'm desperately in love with you,

I'm fatally in love with you.

Even the city can be a quiet place

When you walk alone in the moonlight.

I thought that I had won the race,

But I guess I didn't qualify for the fight.

But I'm still fatally in love with you,

I'm still magically in love with you.

And I'm still desperately in love with you.

Because I will always be

Fatally

In love with you.

Author's Note

This has an unusual beat, so don't mind the flow too much.

Reviews

[Adrian X Fuentess]

I really enjoyed the chorus. Not very experienced in music, but I liked the flow that I found as I was reading. The last verse was my favorite. Kudos.