In His Eyes

Dedicated to my crush.

Sigh............
I look in no his eyes
And even though they're pixilated I become intoxicated
Sigh.............
I want him to be mine
But he does not love me
I'm just a baby 
In his eyes.

Reviews

[steppenwolf]

I think we've all gone through this...hope it all works out.

[Isabelle Howard]

Thanks!

[Trigorin]

Nice concept, but your execution comes off as a little obsessive, and to be honest there's not much to distinguish it from the other gobs and gobs of love poetry out there, especially the love poetry about unrequited love. There's nothing intrinsically wrong with writing about unrequited love, but the way you've done it here is just plain boring.

[Isabelle Howard]

I've only been writing for three years. Give me a break, please.

[Isabelle Howard]

Plus, a fairly young self-concious writer is NOT who you should be criticizing so heavily.