I'm not.

I'm not.

A Poem by Red_Queen
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This is not for you

"

I am sitting.

The water is filling.

I am standing.

The flower is wilting.

I am falling.

The clouds are dieing.

I am living.

The rainbow is ending.

© 2008 Red_Queen


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This is good. The point you were trying to make is very clear! I like that it was short. I think it is a good poem.

Posted 16 Years Ago
Everything is dying as you are living. Yep, from the moment we take our first breath, we are dying. Short poem that gets right to the point!

Posted 16 Years Ago


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 Added on March 18, 2008

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Red_Queen
Red_Queen

Oceanside, CA



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