Every F*****g thing is wrong

This is not for you.

Every, Every, Every

F*****g thing

is wrong

Your eyes produce only errors

Every f*****g thing is wrong

you aer in control of the infinite mind

you are right.

All this time i thought

you wanted me to

be like you.

You didn't

No one can

Not even you can be you

Everything about this is fucked.

I can't breath right.

piss right, live right

eat right, see right

I can't even BE right

NO!

You f*****g listen to me

I am right, you will never be.

Every F*****g thing is wrong

 

Author's Note

We shall never ever ever ever evere verervereevereververeverevereververevereverevereververeverevereverevere

Reviews

[dread or dismay.]

Very Nice poem. The name sure caught be clean. ^^ I really enjoyeed this, it had a stabbing sense of anger, yet somehow, a slight glipse of humour caught me off. Fabulous!

[HoWiE]

Could you BE any angrier?? This was a 'nice' rant in poetic form and shouts a clear message to whomever it is intended for. I winced, I cringed and I could almost hear it ringing in my ears - this sounds like SO many of my ex-girlfriends, lol, good work. Thanks for posting!
HoWiE

[JC Fox]

I loved the fact that this was an angry poem, the rage showed (especially with the deliberate misspellings) All in all an excellent poem that is going into my library ^_^