Lolipops and teddy bears (the real version)

This is not for you. But i will let you borrow it.

What happened to the days

of lolipops and teddybears?

Now all we have

is war and people screaming its not fair.

What happened to the days od sunshine and smiles?

Now all we have

is an innoscence that has been defiled.

The days are gone up in flame

and no one wants to take the blame.

It was me

It was you

It was god

It was everyone

Him, her

He ,she

What happened to the days

Of lolipops and teddy bears.

Reviews

[Fantasyfairy]

Cute. Well expressed, and a nice rant. Lollipops is spelt with two L's though hun. Well written, innocence lost and so true. XX

[Chloe..Across the Unive..]

I really do like this . a bit political and questions that I also wonder about .. i love the phrase you used, also the title, ' what happened to the days of lollipops and teddy bears'?
Sweet innocence all gone .. very good one!

Chloe
xoxo

[SweetPeachesAlways]

Good one! I like this...it's almost a rant but not! Very poetically timed...good job.

[justjenn_2u]

Yes, what happened? Well expressed! Now all we have is wolves walking around in sheep clothing. This world is rather tragic and it's only getting worse. I enjoyed reading this as well as your other poetry.

[Isericanormal]

That was sweet and oh so true. Everything has now changed
not nearly for the better all hope is basically gone with a very dark future.
Nothing pure is left in the world if it is well it is turning. Very Great Point!!

[Lost Little Girl]

This was really cute. The way you wrote it made it seem innocent like it might have written through a childs eyes.

[Red_Queen]

This is one of my favorites. It's about to be published in a poetry anthalogy so when its done i will give evryone the name of the book.

[JC Fox]

Thanks for sharing and it's sad but those days are long gone, it seems like a whole different era with a whole different set of problems, but things were somewhat better in a way. Great poem!

[RLVineh]

good what else can i say

[After Midnight]

I loved it. This was awesome and sotrue. I really liked it cause you are right! Ah, it was awesome.