Eternity's embrace

Eternity's embrace

A Poem by Red_Queen
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A short poem.

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My arms are stretched across

The galaxy

Searching...

In vain for your embrace

My voice is but a whimper

I am screaming into infinity

Searching...

For some sign of you

Your presence

Your love

Why did you blast off away

from me?

You are across the universe

and i am out of fuel

My oxygen is empty

You stole my breath, my life, my everything

With your voice

Searching...

For

Eternity's embrace.

© 2008 Red_Queen


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i enjoyed this piece very much, short, yet intense with emotions.
vivid imagery that seems to explode off of the page
these lines
"My voice is but a whimper
I am screaming into infinity
Searching...
For some sign of you"
beautiful
nice work
thank you for entering my contest



Posted 16 Years Ago


I like the emotion. The words seem to really search for something that was lost or need desperately. It was good. I enjoyed it.

M.

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Great work.

Thought I'd share this with you...



Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I thought it was very nice. I love your choice of words they flowed so perfectly together. The comparisons were great! It spoke to me with every word it was practically inspiring. Wonderful Job!! :~)

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Red_Queen
Red_Queen

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